by Innocent Fairy Jan 3, 2012
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
It's burning, each day |
This poem is emotionally dynamic, the flow constantly keeps enchanting the reader. You chose words that's so pleasant to the ears. I admire the simplicity yet very magnificent in thoughts. Its appealing to the mind, keep up the wonderful work. KUDOS! |
This poem is emotionally dynamic, the flow constantly keeps enchanting the reader. You chose words that's so pleasant to the ears. I admire the simplicity yet very magnificent in thoughts. Its appealing to the mind, keep up the wonderful work. KUDOS! |
Wow.. this poem is amazing.. I love it! I was captivated from the start! You built this craving from beginning to end, and it was really intriguing. I was kind of hoping you would reveal what the craving was at the end, but it still is interesting that you left it a mystery. |
I have to agree with Tangerine here. Ha ha! Looks like raging hormones set on fire. |
by Tangerine
Sounds like a bad case of libido ;) |