Comments : When Mary Sing's

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This was so inspirational. Not only well written but a pleasure to read, uplifting . Excellent is all I can say in this case

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    It is really difficult to see someone you love go through something like this though. When they cannot recognize you it is of course heartbreaking. But there are moments when they do and these moments are the ones to cherish.

    I am not sure if her memory loss was due to an accident or old age (dementia). I found this poem soothing and it felt close to the heart.

    My grandmother has dementia and there are days where she does not know her children or grandchildren. It's sad

    Well written poem

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    What a very touching poem. I think it is so lovely of you to write poems about the people you care for. I totally understand what you are writing about how inspiring they are and how they just get on with things, it is the people who see them who feel the sadness and the emotions and often stop seeing the beauty of the person that has always been there and never left.

    I can imagine this lady singing and everyone listening to it. What a lovely image this is to hold onto.

    What I also like about this poem is that it shows off your personality. It screams out how caring and kind you are and how passionate you are about your work. You clearly love what you do and although it may be hard at times, you always appreciate it like a gift. This really reflects who you are as a person. You are also a gift to this world and to everyone who has had the pleasure of being in your life.

    Lovely :) x