Comments : Out of My Mind

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    After our conversation yesterday I just did some very light reading about what we discussed.

    I understood the poem more knowing what you told me yesterday and what I had googled.

    I enjoyed the poem and I think this is a beautiful piece.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Hellon

    You're doing just fine Michael...I've learned to laugh at myself a lot and then...when people laugh at me I'm already half way there to forgiving them.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This just sounds like something my kids should read in their english books some day and have to analyze for an assignment. A lot of your poetry is that way.
    I loved it.
    Your ending two lines had to me my favorite. I like the first stanza rhymed and almost had a chipper ring to it and in the end it left off with a serious tone. Great write!