Aww this started out as a really sweet poem... but then it got sad as you said your feelings changed. This poem expresses emotions that many people can relate to, to liking someone years ago, and possibly still liking them, or how those feelings change over the years. It brought back some memories reading this, and I smiled because the years may pass but sometimes when you do see someone you used to like, you still get those feelings.

Great job with this poem :)

I love how you have started off the poem and ended it with the same words but at the beginning of the poem - it meant something different to the end.

The words For four years its always been you in the first stanza showed such love and emotions.

When you wrote it in the last stanza you could feel these words had more heartbreak to them.

A well write hun

x

Wow, the flow in this one is amazing... The ending is just so... perfect, dear.

5/5

-Heather