by Armada the Gestalt Jan 4, 2012
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Cold is the wind on this dusty soil, |
by Moonlit Candles
I thought this was an amazing poem. You done a great job of using imagery here. Loved how you used the terms "rain turning to ice running through chilled hands." really captured the poem altogether. Nice write. :) |
by Ronel McCarthy
This is deep............must read it again to digest its depth :) |
by terry
Very much enjoyed. Thank you. |
I like this one too |
by Hellon
There is something about this poem that has brought me back to read it for a third time. Each time I found myself reading in a monologue voice and my thoughts were straying to The Lord of The Rings. I think the repetition throughout emphasises each scene for the reader and is very effective. |