Rushed Destiny

Excellent , I couldn't pick a favorite stanza if I had too. It was good from beginning to the end.

For some reason I got a rush out of this in a good way

This title fits the whole poem perfectly, Sara. I'm so impressed by your writing, you do an amazing job on everything you write. It's all written with such heartfelt and powerful emotions that really bring your poems to life.

5/5

-Heather

/Dancing in this whirlwind
of naivete and uncertainty,
hoping for a ringing sign,
// these are my favorite lines.

We often feel time flies and sometimes it gives to me goosebumps too that i might miss something on the way.

/The path is a beauty and an enigma,
// it's the journey, the path and the experience that makes reaching thedestination all the more delighful

/Can we stop and breathe
so we can collide sensibly?
// this was very thoughful ... perfect ending. rushing through life we have forgotton what it feels to stop and smell the roses :)

LOVED THAT!
It's such a powerful piece
and I felt I should've really taken a breath.

It amazed me, really.. with the end, I hope we could stop for a sec and take a breathe in this race.. though I don't know where exactly we're heading.