I like the first sentence...

"Before we timeline our world"

As for me it means.. Before we start our life together.. or before we create our own history.
Its a good start. It sounds like you are going to set some standards or you are about to warned the person you love before starting a relationship. So it grabs the readers attention.

"I would do anything for your love,
would you do the same for me
every time you get closer
the more you spiral me to never let go,
sometimes I feel we are running
ahead and creating a unbroken path"

Now, this stanza sounds a bit weak.. perhaps consider some revision on it.
Like make your point clearer. It might be tough but I bet you can do it.
At the moment, the ideas sound jumble..

Does it all make sense,
could it be a design like
five fingers in a glove, small
and big hands on a clock,
the sound of one heart beat

Now, all of this are questions.. but it leaves the reader thinking what does make sense? What does the author want to convey with this stanza...

Compelling emotions that have
me searching your love in the
blazing desert under each grain,
hands that are crying blood,
it will not slow me down even
if it takes more than a life time

----Now I LOVE this... " Compelling emotions that have me searching your love in the
blazing desert under each grain" I think it would be better to add " under each grain of sand."
Then I'm thinking that the hands are crying blood because they are hurt from searching the love in the desert.. and now i'm think what will not slow you down? time? the desert? What do you mean by the IT will not slow me.."

Getting hurt or lied
makes me fear can
I take a chance
live, love and die
you hold in the palm of you hand,
I hope to wake up one day
and say, your all mine

--- This is sort of mixed up to me.. But i do like the last part I hope to wake up one day and say, you are all mine. The part before it, it doesn't go with the flow..

Thanks for you comments, ironically your the only one who does lol. like I said before it just mostly comes out from the top of my head nothing is pre written but I will alter it later to make it more appealing in certain areas.