A moment

by Susan Hendra   Jan 5, 2012


A cup of coffee,
a piece of cake,
a cosy place,
a good friend,
a conversation,
a good laugh,
takes me to a small,
nice world.
Where I am the queen
and I have everything
for only a moment
in everyday of my life.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Susan Hendra

    Thanks a lot! :)) I've never expected to get good comments but I do expect to get the positive comments so I can learn more.
    The poem I wrote because I imagined my old life before moving to other country or the country I am now. Well, it seems spontaneous poems are the best ones cause they really come from your mind and heart...

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany Klein

    I love it. It is short simple and to the point! I like to read these kinds of poems due to the fact that even tho they are short, they give out a great emotion...

    And yours was expressing the one part of your day that was and is the most exciting and peaceful part. Great Job!

    5/5 ^_^

  • 12 years ago

    by Susan Hendra

    Thank you :) Sometimes the simple things make a great influence.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    I like the softness and the frames around this poem
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    Ole Carsten

  • 12 years ago

    by Susan Hendra

    Thank you :) Yes, it's about the little things we do are actually special in our eyes.

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