I like this poem. It's simple and sweet. A true perception of one's moment of their day. 5/5

You got to enjoy the little things!! I love this poem short and sweet :)

Thank you :) Yes, it's about the little things we do are actually special in our eyes.

I like the softness and the frames around this poem
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Ole Carsten

Thank you :) Sometimes the simple things make a great influence.

I love it. It is short simple and to the point! I like to read these kinds of poems due to the fact that even tho they are short, they give out a great emotion...

And yours was expressing the one part of your day that was and is the most exciting and peaceful part. Great Job!

5/5 ^_^

Thanks a lot! :)) I've never expected to get good comments but I do expect to get the positive comments so I can learn more.
The poem I wrote because I imagined my old life before moving to other country or the country I am now. Well, it seems spontaneous poems are the best ones cause they really come from your mind and heart...