Comments : A Book Called Life !

  • 12 years ago

    by Dr sarat sonowal

    "By The Ink of Time
    In A Book Called Life !!"
    liked the flow right from the beginning
    you told a story in a very sublime way.....the touch of innocence and also maturity and the ending was beautiful
    By the ink of time
    in a book called life

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I really like this poem,

    I like the way you told the story and how one should mind the present and live in the present rather than trying to find out what lies ahead of us ( future) as well as roaming in the past.

    Well done..

    There is a small typo in together..

    Lets start the journey
    (((togather )))now-

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    I can't agree less bro, ..what marvel you unravelled here. Great job, take 5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Schrodingers cat

    Loved it!! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I love the flow of the word's :) 5/5