"By The Ink of Time
In A Book Called Life !!"
liked the flow right from the beginning
you told a story in a very sublime way.....the touch of innocence and also maturity and the ending was beautiful
By the ink of time
in a book called life
12 years ago
by L
I really like this poem,
I like the way you told the story and how one should mind the present and live in the present rather than trying to find out what lies ahead of us ( future) as well as roaming in the past.
Well done..
There is a small typo in together..
Lets start the journey
(((togather )))now-
12 years ago
by Marvellous
I can't agree less bro, ..what marvel you unravelled here. Great job, take 5!