What you dont know

by Angel   Jan 5, 2012


She wipes her eyes,
So you dont know she's crying.
She turns away,
So you dont know she's lying.

She wakes in the morning,
But cant face her fears.
She stays silent,
And wipes her tears.

She wants to love you,
But she's scared of trying.
She stays alone,
So you dont know she's dying...

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  • 12 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    Oh my goodness! Great poem! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Aww I cried threw diss one

    Babii it's amazing..ur amazing lol

    100/100

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I would suggest some commas here and there to keep the flow even better..its good..it seems to tell a story of a troubled girl. Its simple, yet sad but conveys something big.

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Just ok n straight to d point. But, I guess...she's yet to be herself thru her Silence.. Understand d@ Severity moulds a tough mind..but, Forgiveness is peaceful vengeance. Tame d Past n Name ur Future.. Nicely done, 5pts!