by sun spots Jan 6, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
The colour of love i see in your eyes. |
by sun spots
Thank for the advice Jenni, i will drop the commas. |
by Jenni
I think that the title is quite eye-catching and I also like how you define it. That proves how important this person is to you. I think that this poem flows quite well and it's definately powerful. The only suggestion I have is to exchange the comma with apostrophs. |
by sun spots
Glad you read it all.its a real eye opener and it all fits.I am how i am because of you.Get used to my passion because its all for you.You can investigate any part of me you like.XXX. |
by sun spots
This is where you are again. I am on line to. Its taken me all my time reading your scorpio description. You are a true romantic. I never knew you where so passionate about things. This is a new side of stephen that I have to investiate further. xxx |