This is where you are again. I am on line to. Its taken me all my time reading your scorpio description. You are a true romantic. I never knew you where so passionate about things. This is a new side of stephen that I have to investiate further. xxx

Glad you read it all.its a real eye opener and it all fits.I am how i am because of you.Get used to my passion because its all for you.You can investigate any part of me you like.XXX.

I think that the title is quite eye-catching and I also like how you define it. That proves how important this person is to you. I think that this poem flows quite well and it's definately powerful. The only suggestion I have is to exchange the comma with apostrophs.
I can also confirm your note.

Thank for the advice Jenni, i will drop the commas.