Comments : Reconstruction

  • 13 years ago

    by Lauren denbow

    This is really good i also like your other pieces your a good writer

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Bound to self depreciating thoughts
    Lingering scars of the past
    Remembering what it was like to hurt
    A reminder that failure is always possible
    And this would be epic

    ^^ I loved how this was penned

    This whole poem was a bit sad to me. I loved how you wrote it, it was just a venting session yet with a poetic twist.

    New love is scary, but I like how there was a glimpse of hope at the end and a willingness to change your fear. This was a great piece!
    chelsey