This is good. i liked how you worded the poem and how you joined the lines together..

It's really sad how innocent children who still have a lot to gain and lose in this world are taken away from a life they could still live. Really well-written poem. I love the word choice. Keep writing :) 5/5

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This is a really sad poem but its so well written and u chosen your words in an awesome way 5/5 really deserve it keep on =)