Daddy):

by victoriaa frias   Jan 7, 2012


I should've known this day was happening
But I was only five
And you were pail as white
I was sitting eating candy

Then out of nowhere
I saw people crying
I came closer
It was my family
I wanted to know what was wrong
They all said that you were gone
I didn't know what to do
I was still little and I didn't get to spend time with you
Why'd you have to leave
That day I just knew that it was the worst day ever

I didn't wanna believe
in that guy we call god
because if he was real he wouldn't of done this to me
so now as you can see
I'm athiest and just believe in me cutting myself deep
Because it wass all of that days fault!

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    First of all I'm sorry for your loss, one never manages to get over it.
    I think that your poem is filled with emotions, but it needs to be tied together some more and you might want to think about using some punctuation. The fact that the feelings are so heartfelt make this poem really captivating, but quite heartwrenching too.

    Chin up!