Umm... what to say about this piece? How about that it is stunning? And creative and so amazing! The word choice is terrific and the use of imagery here and there is capturing. Emotion manages to run through this piece just as anything I have "heard" you say. The style is a little bland, however it seems to work with the message here. Your voice is clear as always, and your thoughts so intriguing. Excellent job as usual.

The best write! like omg 10000/10000

This is such a fantastic piece, I love how you worded it and how much it really shows about life. I think it is a perfectly penned piece... 5/5

Nice poem good props

Absolutely brilliant young man keep up this brilliant talent you have again well done to you.