Comments : We Can

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow this is such an uplifting and inspiring poem... I love it and I love how it made me feel!
    I like the rhyme scheme, I don't know if you have written a rhyming poem recently, but this rhyme scheme was very well done! I like how the rhymes aren't forced, and the whole poem flows so well... This poem also reminded me of "Man in the Mirror" by Michael Jackson, one of the best songs that really inspires me...

    Really enjoyed this poem! It made me feel strong and happy =D like I want to make a difference!

    May I just point out some typos/grammar mistakes?

    Pull you strength together
    >> your

    So stand next to me and lets
    >> let's

    Just a quick edit and it will be perfect =) great job sweetie!

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    What an inspiring piece,
    reminds me of the song "We can" By Leann Rimes, but I see "Man In the Mirror" too

    The flow was fantastic and I loved the simple rhymes, really well incorpirated.

    A really great piece of poetry with an uplifting tone and message

    Xxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    That is so inspirational.. gotta love the soul you put in there. great

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Hun this is a very moving poem full of inspirational meanings.

    The rhyming in it is beautiful and each stanza flows well into the next.

    The meaning behind this is very uplifting. I feel a sense of pride reading this poem.

    This is definitely one of those poems you should read when you're feeling down and need a pick me up. A poem when you feel alone, to read and know that someone will be standing beside you to go through things in life together.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Powerful! inspiring, with a wonderful message, well done ~

  • 12 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    //That sometimes what it takes
    to change the world is one man
    //
    indeed, this is so true :) I loved the feel of these verses :)

    /So stand next to me and let's
    show them that together we can

    // I found these very sweet :) with a hint of innocence :)
    as everyone said very inspiring poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This an uplifting poem, very insipirational. Great work

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A strong and uplifting poem. I love the determination the flow and the innocence of it. Excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Another amazing flow with rhythm and rhyme