Funeral of my rose

by CryingHeart   Jan 7, 2012


As my cuts bleed,
As i breathe,
I don't know why
I can't feel the pain
And as i am standing in the rain
Their is nothing but you in vain
I can't believe i still love you,
With all my heart and soul
Why can't you rise above and be with me,
Talk to me and let me free???
Why are you like that??
And why does it makes me want you more??
Everyday i celebrate the funeral of my rose......

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  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Funeral of my rose
    --the title really caught my attention.

    "Their is nothing but you in vain"
    their--there

    "Why can't you rise above and be with me,
    Talk to me and let me free???"
    It seems like your perspective is a dead person's mind...

    I like the idea and concept, but with a title as attention-grabbing as that, to be honest, this poem fell short. Still good, though, so keep writing :)

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Exotic Rose

    I love your title, very creative poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by victor dyck

    Excellentuseofverbs andfeelingimagery

  • 12 years ago

    by victor dyck

    Excellentuseofverbs andfeelingimagery

  • 12 years ago

    by CryingHeart

    Thank you so much

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