..mmh, I think the explicity employed in the story telling, somehow absorbed the appeal, though I frankly can assure.. the gist was breath-takingly, a heart-felt, drama. And bravo! especially to the cheer-lady within the story line.. Nicely done.. Keep writing!

A strong poem which rhymes and is full of emotion. I loved the way you wrote it allowing a story to unfold, giving the reader a strong and vivid image within their mind. You have a strong, stay strong.

It is good n strng n it rhymes well nicd keep it up