This poem reminded me of my nanna who passed away siz years ago.

I liked how you were honest and open about how you feel. You pulled at my heart strings

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I thought of you again to day and i asked the question, why? why he had to take you and not leave you here by my side, didn't he no i needed you, didn't he no i cared and that my life will never be the same without you right there.
Who can i turn to when i am feeling sad, who can i turn to when i'm a little mad .You always knew just what to say when i was feeling blue and now god has taken you. i just do not know what to do.People go on like its normal, me, well i sit and cry and ask the question, why? why we ever had to say goodbye?

Just my suggestion, i edited it, put in the commas and collected the tense where necessary without messing with your unique style of not separating it into stanzas. If separated into stanzas, it would flow even better.

A wonderful poem you have written here, so full of emotions and very heartfelt. 5