by Tyler Beckham Jan 8, 2012
category :
Life, society /
about society
Territorial human beings |
I really appreciate the praise, Chelsey. Moreover, thank you for the constructive criticism. I will definitely try to take your advice and apply it to my later work. |
by Chelsey
I thought this was a very interesting topic!..I like how you chose to word this poem. I think however it could use some commas so it doesnt seem so run-on. |