Some people .........without nothing/ this contrasts with the rain that falls on everyone without prejudice ...........underlying message conveyed. Great poem

The entire piece was pricless....

"The raindrop has traced the window
as I am observing from the inside
I am dreaming away for someday,
I will ask the rain to dance with me!

^^^ this stanza can be felt... it's a deep and heartfelt write, through and through... very nice~

Great

Thank you all :) This poem was made some years ago when I was inside at the shop and it was raining outside. I looked how people acted....I enjoyed myself looking at the rain...and hoped that I could be outside one day and just be with the rain :)