U know this actually sounds like a song,,amazing lovely true and u great everything fantasicaly written :) 5/5

Well hun this poem is beautiful and I am glad you have written this about your boyfriend. By the sounds of things you have followed your heart and made the right choice ;)

I love the first stanza - I love how you said he makes you smile so much your face hurts to move it lol very cute

It makes me think of when people are taking photos at a Wedding and the bride is smiling the whole day that by night everything hurts lol

I hope that he reads this poem because it is a lovely tribute to him

x

I do agree with Kristian, it sounds like a song. Its amazingly written, feels real, flows smooth, and just very sweet.

Good job sweetie :)

I would love for you to read your poem on my radio show by phone. If interested email me, thanks !

Wow... that was just beautiful and very sweet, Holly. :D And I get to be all sappy and say "AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW." -=giggles=- Anyway.

5/5

-Heather