Comments : 22

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I liked how you formatted this and the wording was excellent. Sooth flow , clear and precise.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Nice one there, very personal and on point. I love the rhythm of the poem. Keep it up.

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Always be yourself and never care what anyone else has to say about it. Great job expressing how things are for people who are bi and who strive to be more than just a "different" person according to parents results.

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by anonymous

    Nice flow great choice of words... very interesting 5/5