Comments : Open your eyes

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Wow love..
    this is amazing<3

    Its a sad thing nobody really does take the time to truly look & get to know the people around them. Everything yousaid does happen. Nobody lets people know what they truly go through bcuz nobody asks.

    Written straight from the heart<3
    Love it. Flawless
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Brilliantly written... True about so many people around us... Unfortunately, most people don't take the time to really look at other people.

    You made this poem a piece of brutal truth and powerful emotions. Each line flowed brilliantly and perfectly. The questions definitely painted images for even the simplest and blindest eye to see.

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by Blackstar

    Really amazing how you've written this.
    It's all so true, most people don't even see whats happening with others around them.

    5/5 + Fav :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    This is an amazing piece. Really beautiful and write in subtle way. Good penned:))
    ~C