The Day When Dreaming Ends

by Toni   Jun 25, 2004


Tears trickle down a cold lost dream
Nothing is ever as it seems
Hopeful thoughts for a tragic end
No remedie left for life to mend

Living from each painful hour to hour
Watching petals fall from a flower
Softly I try to follow the night
Can't think straight in this burning light

Lay me down gently for I am broken
The last weak voice inside has spoken
Depression has left its undying mark
On my burnt out dying heart

Why live life from each dream to dream
Drowning here in my tearful stream
Wondering when I can at last begin
To live my life once again

I make it here, all on my own
Still, my pain each day has grown
Hope is just one heartbeat away
If I could return to my yesterday

For I know the day when dreaming ends
Is the day when my heart spends
Its last vital sobbing breath
For that day will be my death

Please comment if u can, it would mean so much xxxxx

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  • 20 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanks all SO much for all your comments! It really means a lot! Love y'all xxxx if any of u need anytime to talk to anytime jus email me at antoniagregory@hotmail.com!

  • 20 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    SUPER DOOPER AWESOME POEM ;)
    that was written soooooo wellll...i thought it was great.
    Best of luck ;)

  • 20 years ago

    by Kallie

    I absolutely LOVE this poem I know how u feel because my life throws me hard balls every day, Its hard, but alwayz remember that tomorrow can be better and that someone out there loves u, Ima add u to my favorites u are a truly beautiful writer, live another day and write another poem I really wanna read it!!--Kallie

  • 20 years ago

    by Tina

    That was an excellent poem and it has alot of meaning, you are a beautiful writer! I can totally relate to this poem, just remember never to give up hope! "Hold on for one more day!"
    --Tina