Time of absence

Very sad friendship poem, I like how you said a dusting of your presence. Makes me think of old pictures and letters just looming around, watching your every move and a feeling you cannot shake. Well done.

Raw intense and well written. It's all been said above so will just say well done.

There's so much emotion engraved in your poem. I really liked reading this one. The word choice is excellent and I think it's one of the best sad-optimistic friendship poems I've ever read.

Well done!!

I really love the message behind this one, the way i interpret it anyway. i have a place inside my mind i call my inner sanctum where i only let people that are really close to me dwell, and if they leave that place it is devastating. the image of the door in your heart gave it a really homely feel i think, almost like the kind of soft image of a cozy cabin somewhere... anyway i digress. the message behind is really awesome, and while the way the word choice might be tweaked here and there i really think youre onto something with this piece.

I've read this piece a few times now and I have to say this poem touches me...each line almost brought me to tears... well done!