Fallen Eyes

by Maple Tree   Jan 9, 2012


When I shut these eyes of mine, creatively I become whatever my heart desires...

traveling often within clouds, sprinkling tree tops with dew kisses

branches laced with pearls, magenta prisms igniting the sun

captivating an onlooker walking by, drenched in sorrow...

In one split second, his heart goes from darkness to sunshine, just by a smile, that graced his fallen eyes...

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww this is lovely. It reminded me of the poem about smiling is infectious so pass it on. You never know just who needs a smile to brighten up their day and they do not cost anything!

    I love how free you can be with your mind and your words. In this poem you even describe how free you are in your heart as well. Such a peaceful thought that you can do anything you want and just be anywhere you want to be if you close your eyes.

    Amazing poem x

  • 13 years ago

    by tainted melody

    This was very interesting....i liked the flow of it. nice write :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Tyler Beckham

    'branches laced with pearls, magenta prisms igniting the sun'
    YES!! Brilliant abstract imagery.
    I could read that line over and over.

  • 13 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    When I shut these eyes of mine, creatively I become whatever my heart desires...

    this was my fav line of the poem..the wording is good and the content is wonderful..
    5/5

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