When I shut these eyes of mine, creatively I become whatever my heart desires...

this was my fav line of the poem..the wording is good and the content is wonderful..
5/5

'branches laced with pearls, magenta prisms igniting the sun'
YES!! Brilliant abstract imagery.
I could read that line over and over.

This was very interesting....i liked the flow of it. nice write :)

Aww this is lovely. It reminded me of the poem about smiling is infectious so pass it on. You never know just who needs a smile to brighten up their day and they do not cost anything!

I love how free you can be with your mind and your words. In this poem you even describe how free you are in your heart as well. Such a peaceful thought that you can do anything you want and just be anywhere you want to be if you close your eyes.

Amazing poem x