Its a really great poem, I love ur writings:)
Well done a 5/5

Wow this is great and amazing with beauty inside,,I feel I can play it out like a movie and it's somewhat simple but yet hard to find as this poem was terrifically written and flow, wording and rhyme was wonderful a very fantastic job,,I loved it and am delighted to read it :) 5/5

That's really sweet and touching.

5/5

Wow... This poem is amazing. I nominated it because I was so touched by it. It's just one of those poems that seems to hit so many people to the very core. The two best parts of writing in my opinion is to make the reader be able to relate and to make the reader feel exactly what you're feeling when you wrote it. I believe that you did both things in this poem and it just had this beautiful morbid flow that gave it such power.

5/5

-Heather

Outstanding rhythm and rhyme with wonderful imagery

This is really a great piece of work.. everything is perfect. I loved your work. You are a great Writer. Keep It up . 5/5