PERFECT!
First - the beginning felt so enticing, and the descriptions are awesome. It's like a subtle rhyme there when you ended with ten pm. I like how it sounds.

Second - holy sheep! the incorporation of 'sheep' felt at ease.. and ending with sweet dreams also.

great one:)

Hi
Simply good, I am happy it wasn't some rams,just soft sheeps. Counting sheeps is good even in dreams

Best Regards
Ole Carsten

Captures the moments and sensations of falling asleep perfectly along with the delightful visions that must occur afterwards. I hope when I fall asleep into that certain night, it is the sleep of such sweet dreams as this!

This is like an adult lullabye. you can feel the tiredness and after you read it you wonder what thoughts you will get now when you next sleep and think of sheep! x