Comments : Dirty Birdies

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Only you can take the topic of bird poop and make it sound so ... poetic lol

    I love the fact that your poems go anywhere and everywhere. You talk about everything. I think that is wonderful.

    I like the rhyming of this poem. It flows well.

    From the title you wouldn't think you were talking about their poop until the first stanza. The whole idea that it looks like snow lol possibly green bits in it as well.

    Well written!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Lol I agree with lizz, you seriously have a way of coming up of a poem out of nothing, and turning it into something one can enjoy, read, analyze, and even laugh with!

    anyone, can write a poem, but not anyone can write poems like those written by you!

    keep this up, very creative.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    No one can make me laugh by reading a poem like you do.

    Yes, I bow to you the master of rhyme. You indeed can write about anything and thats a gift, it shows that poetry runs in your veins, lol :P

    Super funny and creative.
    Keep them coming :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Giggles..... Oh i love this piece!!!! the rhyme and word usage is priceless!!! very nice~

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronnie

    Haha...you could build houses with the strength of those birds turds!!

    Nice one

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronnie

    Haha...you could build houses with the strength of those birds turds!!

    Nice one

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Hahaha
    a poem I can absolutely relate too on a number of levels :)