Deep and and descriptive for sure! Your words painted awesome imagery MT, esp. this one for me

where the owls become her angels
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Thanks for posting this slice of darkness, I am enjoying it with my morning coffee. :)

Sacrificing her own breathe

^ ^ I think you meant breath? innocent typo :)

demonic passion sang in his eyes, poisonous kisses devoured her soul
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I loved that line. It really makes the reader sense the evil that is in this relationship. Your word choice was great here!

Your last line was very intriguing and almost a little gut wrenching! I loved it!

He banished her to die alone, where the owls become her angels

- great line, i do wonder if you have a dictionary up there in your brain that pings out all these words and idea's for your poems!

xx