"In the shadows of darkest nights,
A lonely knight who fought his fights_
Against the world he hold his might,
For his Angel and to rights."

My favorite part. I love it. It tells an amazing story of a knight figting for his Angel. Keep writing.

-Angel

Thanks Angel !

Well this is a good poem I can tell the effort you put into this and it paid off , it was an enjoyable read, I liked the rhyming in here as well. . .defintlety tells the tale of a lonely knight :(
Nice work.

Oh my goodness... I love this poem, completely amazing, it made me breathless! 5/5

I love this one

I think this is your best I really like it it was very emotional. very touching its great :):):):):):):

I think this is your best I really like it it was very emotional. very touching its great :):):):):):):

I think this is your best I really like it it was very emotional. very touching its great :):):):):):):

I am adding this poem to my favs. its the best and most interesting poem i have read so far. please comment on a poem of mine as well if you don't mind.

I love it!!!

Well written! i really loved it!
keep going!

Wow, a really dark and magnificant piece. I like the feeling and images it brings.
Nice.
~S

Wow! Really a dark and imaginary piece. Well done.