Awww that was lovely<3

Oooooooo what a pretty piece this one is... the word usage is really awesome!

Wow this is amazing great job.

Its flows really good. Though, I read it and it sounded good to me, but my images weren't working... I probably need a dictionary for a few words.. lol.

Wow! I don't think I've ever read a poem that detailed, that beautiful, and with that many interesting words! this was seriously an amazing, small, sensitive piece of poetry that I absolutely LOVED.
Chelsey