Little I know.....

by Illusion   Jan 12, 2012


Who are u? An angel in disguise?
I look at ur pic and my eyes can't be precise,
u must be a revelation of the word "surprise",
just like a candle in the breeze, glowing than a thousand stars,
A definition of beauty, can't be bought with a million price,
A stunning posture, model jealous of ur perfect stance,
ur dazzling eyes got me gazing like a fireflies,
little I know but I'm sure that ur kind is rare,
U there me here is the definition of the word "unfair"....

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    I like the imagery in this piece, its vivid and suits the message of your poem. Which i believe is appreciating the subjects rare qualities. However, you seem not happy that fate disjointed you two hence, missing your chances in life with the subject. The only suggestion i have for you is, you shouldn't be abbreviating your words and break your poems into stanzas. They seem to take away the formal disposition of the poem. If you work on that on your poems, you'll get profound remarks thus intriguing compositions. If not you have quiet an interesting talent but with more writing and learning, your poems will be more appealing. Nice read.

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