I like the imagery in this piece, its vivid and suits the message of your poem. Which i believe is appreciating the subjects rare qualities. However, you seem not happy that fate disjointed you two hence, missing your chances in life with the subject. The only suggestion i have for you is, you shouldn't be abbreviating your words and break your poems into stanzas. They seem to take away the formal disposition of the poem. If you work on that on your poems, you'll get profound remarks thus intriguing compositions. If not you have quiet an interesting talent but with more writing and learning, your poems will be more appealing. Nice read.