You could possibly change your title to 'Heart of Autumn' or 'Autumn Heart' it's a bit odd the way you have it.. but that should be the least of your worries because this is really a gorgeous piece.

It's great to see you this happy again, & I really love the metaphor here, it works well. Obviously the play on words is lovely too. I think I've used this idea myself, but I love how two different poets can express it two different ways. Good job! Really happy to see you happy again and full of colors ;)

I suggest you keep that the way it is.. because it sounds so organic and straightforward.. everything feels so right for me because of the delicacy in the tone and those comparisons of seasons.
Great actually!

Nana,
I liked it

for the sake of its
new meaning,
Radiant colours, for its
novel symbols.

^My favourite stanza :)

I love the wording which I felt was so gentle but with that hidden tone of sadness.

What an ending too.
Amending my first statement to
"I love this so much!"

:)

This is a beautiful poem with lots of vivid images here and heartfelt emotions of love.

My heart, an Autumn
endlessly falling-
a strange season by itself
yet blossoming like no other.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I love how you used your heart as if to say they were leaves falling from an Autumn tree. As if to say falling in love. Such a gorgeous image

I love how in the second stanza you brought forward another season - Winter. My favorite season of all.

You then write about Spring and Summer in your last two stanzas - I think what you have done is brilliant.

It reminds me of the saying "A Love For All Seasons"

I think using nature to compare feelings of emotions love etc. is a great way to write poetry. They are of course both natural things in life!!!

Well done hun

x

Really good poem..nice flow amazingly written

Well done 100/100 from mee love(:

Great opening stanza
-a strange season by itself
yet blossoming like no other. - wonderful

I like the metaphors. And the heartfelt emotions that come thru.

I really like this poem and how you liken your essence the the seasons, He as winter and yourself as Autumn. I enjoyed how you attribute falling in your poem to both the nature of Autumn
and to also how you keep falling for your love. There is a sweet serenity to this poem that is unmistaken. A simple master piece 5/5

This is an exuberating piece, using nature to compose poems is so enriching thus real. All seasons use to describe the whole experience of love. It's spell-binding, i love the imagery, it's so vivid. I can imagine this in a love song. What a classic love poem.

This is an exuberating piece, using nature to compose poems is so enriching thus real. All seasons use to describe the whole experience of love. It's spell-binding, i love the imagery, it's so vivid. I can imagine this in a love song. What a classic love poem. :-)