Nice poem, I can relate to it.
Liked how it rhymes.

5/5

Nicely written. Its sad you have to through this without having someone to listen to your cries. This is sad but you must always have hope and faith in better things.

If u could look up in d sky, now d rain is high, u will find a reason to smile, i know.. That's ur Rainbow! We r in this together.. I understand d feel in this one.. But, cheer up!!! Nice n Perfect!

Very sad and painful piece here.... the flow was well done... and the message was felt.. thank you for sharing~

I can tottaly relate to all your poems you are an amzing writer and i want to hear more

Your rhyme was well done, not forced but with a nice flow. The third stanza was a little shaky compared to the rest but overall the poem was very good

I rate (Excellent), I enjoy the rhyming !

We all can relate. you can check my poem out if you don't believe me. Very nice poem btw. and don't take this the wrong way but ur friends and now, me, your new online friend r here to help you if u need any. I am not a stalker or anything. Just a person who felt what you are feeling in that poem

Such sadness flows out of this poem, word by word. Wanting somebody to pay attention before you take yourself out of this world. Not sure of how you went so far with that cut.

I can see you looking down at your wrist wondering how did it happen that bad.

Beautiful job
5/5

Wow this is frightingly lovely
Just look up and he will listen