Comments : Poets in a Cage

  • 12 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Love the way the syllables bounce in this poem . this write makes me want to read some of your poetry about the cage of existence we live in.

    You know I analyze our cage more then
    the average bear.

    have you written many a new poetry on the topic that is our universe.

    do tell me their titles

    Randy East
    Fellow deep thinker

    Read my latest poems when you get a chance.

    and as I said... tell me 3 or four of yours that I can ponder on.

  • 12 years ago

    by Fsams

    I like the description of the cage we live in.

    "In the hearts of hopeless romantics
    is the rhythm of the universe
    where evolution is so diverse."

    I loved reading these lines Michael. They have a lot of meaning bound onto them. That explains what some of the caged poets do and the kind of mournful pieces they come up with.

    A short one with a lot of greatness in it.

    Loved it.