The end im numb

by Whispy.Gypsy   Jan 13, 2012


Hear the gunfire
see bodies falling all around
hear the silence then seize fire
see these chains to which im bound

no more crying for i have drowned
in my tears my flesh cold
here lies my body on the bloody ground
no more happyness to withhold

see the smoke rising above
hear the screams silence them all
see the forces watch them shove
all the living watch them fall

the forces of my life withheld so long
i shall now see the darkness ive become
all my life ive only known wrong
now my body lay the end im numb

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  • 12 years ago

    by lOsT sOuL

    Wow...nice work..this is really a good poem...it's a sad poem . It shows the Dark side too..good mix of words which makes poem great.. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Don't give up my frnd.....
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Emmanuel Pineda

    Very nice!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lizza Tiedemann

    Nice Piece i really like
    although i didnt really get the meaning until i read eht 4 time's lol :P
    but well written <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Bobo

    Wow I can feel your pain and frustration I really liked this piece keep up the good work!! i voted 5/5

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