I know u r living in pain, I know u r so sad, but u must never give up, even in the very end. Try to stay strong.
Wish u the best, and I hope things get better:)
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Wow I can feel your pain and frustration I really liked this piece keep up the good work!! i voted 5/5

Nice Piece i really like
although i didnt really get the meaning until i read eht 4 time's lol :P
but well written <3

Very nice!

Don't give up my frnd.....
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Wow...nice work..this is really a good poem...it's a sad poem . It shows the Dark side too..good mix of words which makes poem great.. 5/5