Girl this poem rod not only does it have a twist but it makes you want to cry I love it its now my favorite

Oh wwwooowww!! thats crazy deep!! 1000/1000

Poetry has a power of taking reader along with it to places & this piece had same impact on me, very powerful write....loved it.

all the best and take care

Wow, love... So powerful and pulled me into the story so deeply...

If you fix it let me know, I want to read it once you fix; it's an amazing tragic story.

5/5

-Heather

The idea was awesome the emotions were so powerful sends chills down me i loved it x