by CathyButterflyJC Jan 15, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Josh by K.V. |
by Beautiful Soul
Even though this is an older poem from you, I can tell this came from your heart. In the third stanza diamond should be diamonds because you are meaning more than one. In the fourth stanza change laughterful to wonderful. Laughterful is not a word lol. Now for the poem. |