by Michael D Nalley Jan 15, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
My love said I must go now, don't look for me in tombs. |
by Maple Tree
Oh what a heartfelt and emotional piece this is... very pretty.. the rhyme scheme is elegant, very nice~ |
I have trouble writing long sentences and making sense of them. This however was excellent, the flow smooth, the rhyme unforced and wording picked with thoughtful perfection |
by Tara Kay
I loved this piece sooo much, it was well written, and flowed well, I most enjoyed the ending, it was very poetic. |