Quite wish

by Ole Carsten   Jan 15, 2012


Some tells fortune in,
a cup of coffee,
I want to see you
with a piece of cake,
in a cozy place,
with me who loves you,
Small talking about everything
Smiling and laughing
take me there soon,
make it our nice world.
The place where we are the center
For fragments in time
Until we are there
every day of our life.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi James
    I am happy and humble for this kind remarks
    br
    Ole Carsten

  • 14 years ago

    by James Pike

    When 2 souls meet, and the whole world seems to disappear. Excellent work here. Perfect love.

  • 14 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ole-

    What a beautiful piece this one is..... precious... I love your word usage...

    "Some tells fortune in,
    a cup of coffee,
    I want to see you
    with a piece of cake,
    in a cozy place,"

    ^^^^ that is a yummy poetic dessert stanza for sure :-)

    on a technical note:

    "wit me who loves you"

    ^^ did you mean "with" ?

    very nice Ole, well done~

  • 14 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi great thanks

    br
    Ole

  • 14 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Nice touch

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