Comments : Quite wish

  • 12 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Nice touch

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi great thanks

    br
    Ole

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ole-

    What a beautiful piece this one is..... precious... I love your word usage...

    "Some tells fortune in,
    a cup of coffee,
    I want to see you
    with a piece of cake,
    in a cozy place,"

    ^^^^ that is a yummy poetic dessert stanza for sure :-)

    on a technical note:

    "wit me who loves you"

    ^^ did you mean "with" ?

    very nice Ole, well done~

  • 12 years ago

    by James Pike

    When 2 souls meet, and the whole world seems to disappear. Excellent work here. Perfect love.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi James
    I am happy and humble for this kind remarks
    br
    Ole Carsten