This was an interesting poem to read... I like how you put the words "prosaic" and "mosaic" next to each other, it was a fun part.

I also like the meaning and message behind this. I think it's great to be devout and follow a religion you really believe in.

Great job with this poem!

But which promised land my friend?

I don't know why I thought that it's Palestine... but I see it's heaven.

At any level, I think it's an awesome mosaic.