You really dance techno to relieve your pain? :O

Despite my hate for techno music, I found this very amusing because of its originality and shortness in length, yet it's so much creative.

"Potions and Lotions vibrate violently"

---- Wicked was the first adjective that jumped to my mind when I finished reading this first sentence..
It has a great imagery, I'm picturing a witch or a lab doctor.. I'm unsure to what to picture first.

"upon my cast iron skillet, laced with insanity"

--- Yup, i'm picturing a Witch.. (with all do respect, I'm not calling the author witch) But this sentence incites my brain to picture it. Just like the movies how they show the witches dancing while they are preparing their potions and all of that stuff..

"I am a vision of manic illusions"

--- CRaziness, and more dancing and insanity.. lol.. I love this sentence. It creates a chaos within my mind. I'm unsure what is left or right. or if its an illusion or if its a vision or simple the reality..

"dancing vicariously along with a techno tune"

-- its a modern witch for it dances with the techno tune.

"my little secret recipe for stress relief..."

---Wonderful recipe.. Dancing does help but now I can't stop picture a witch dancing..and making potions and all that stuff.

I like this piece. . I found a sense of humor within some lines and I also found it cute.. rather than scary. well done.

Oh, to begin with I thought it was going to be another tongue twister lol.

This is so imaginative and creates such a strong image of well... freedom of dance? I know if I was to attempt to dance I would be locked up lol.

Great worded poem. x